Antigone Cadmus

Sorry, Rosey, but I completely disagree with Lily. What killed this story for me was a complete lack of emotion. That isn't to say that this story isn't good, it ...

The teacher had just shaken her head Ugh... I'm not a hundred percent, but shook, maybe? If you know it's shaken, then go with shaken, I know for a fact ...

Bonjour whatever1274, You seem to have already received nit-picky reviews about your grammar, so I'll do more of an overall. What your story lacks is emotion. Right now it's just ...

Hello Sakura! I'm Antigone and I'll be your reviewer today! Placing myself outside of go - somewhere people Erm... what does this mean? Do you mean: "Placing myself outside of ...

You accidentally posted in the wrong genre? That's no problem at all! I'm a lowly Instructor (hence my purple name), so I can't actually move your post... but others can! ...

Haemorrhaging is spelled h-e-m-o-r-r-h-a-g-i-n-g. Hemorrhaging. Try to spell your title right, dear. Also, don't explain what it means. Hemorrhage is common enough. Explaining makes the reader feel st

Whoa. :shock: Those are some biiiiggg paragraphs. Not only does this look intimidating, it is also the incorrect way to format. Whenever someone new is talking, start a new paragraph. ...

Meh. It was alright. Definitely not her best. Same basic theme as her other novels -- if you've read one Picoult, you've read them all. As much as I thought ...

Mixtecs Assuming this is the happy medium between Aztecs and Mayas? :wink: Of course, historically speaking, this ethnic group makes much more sense.

Alright. I am in more of over all mood today, and since you've already got most of your nit-picky grammar issues out of the way, this is going to be ...

These books make me want to hurt people. He totally screwed up his mythology, mixes traditional and Latinized spellings, and the writing was just corny. But it was mostly the ...

Juniper! I swear I'll review this soon, but I really need to point this out: At that moment, I had a feeling that working at Mayflower Center for Challenged children ...

You posted it... :shock: Please, please edit before posting, dahlin'. Even though I'm doing this contest as well, I will critique it for you. Possibly. Tomorrow, most likely. Tee hee. ...

Asxz! Back again I see. Well, let's get to this. There's something here that disturbs me. It's the fact that I understand more of your story from reading that little ...

Hello, Zaddie Caso! I'm Antigone, and I will be your reviewer for the moment. Wow. First of all, let me tell you that this is a very powerful piece. The ...